Jake, as discussed this is looking more in line with the conventions we expect from a magazine.
Front Cover: I like the way you have boxed out the writing so it is easily read. - Can you consider playing around with the Free Cd pug - could you take this off the diagonal? - Your image looks a little un professional in terms of how it has been cropped, can you look at this, moreover the image quality is not as good as what it should be.
Contents: Your contents page has a clear structure to it and is easy to follow. - Can you consider your coloumn sizes and maintain the same size for each? - Some of the positioning is a little off in the centre, please look at this.
Double Page Spread: Your article is simple to follow and makes use of the drop capitals. - Could you look at where your title sits? Could it go right up against the edge of the left hand side? - Can your image take up the whole of the left - if not what are you planning on putting at the top? - One column is bigger than the other - why is this?
Jake, as discussed this is looking more in line with the conventions we expect from a magazine.
ReplyDeleteFront Cover: I like the way you have boxed out the writing so it is easily read.
- Can you consider playing around with the Free Cd pug - could you take this off the diagonal?
- Your image looks a little un professional in terms of how it has been cropped, can you look at this, moreover the image quality is not as good as what it should be.
Contents: Your contents page has a clear structure to it and is easy to follow.
- Can you consider your coloumn sizes and maintain the same size for each?
- Some of the positioning is a little off in the centre, please look at this.
Double Page Spread: Your article is simple to follow and makes use of the drop capitals.
- Could you look at where your title sits? Could it go right up against the edge of the left hand side?
- Can your image take up the whole of the left - if not what are you planning on putting at the top?
- One column is bigger than the other - why is this?